Kale, Libby, Bella and Kaawhia you did an excellent job here. I know it took a lot of thought and work to make the timing perfect so well done. It is a very effective way of giving people an idea of his voyage - much better than just writing it. The red path was an excellent idea. Your narration is clear and concise too. I would like to hear how you felt about making it - including the challenges and what you would do next time to improve it? Mr Marquand.
Kale, Libby, Bella and Kaawhia you did an excellent job here. I know it took a lot of thought and work to make the timing perfect so well done. It is a very effective way of giving people an idea of his voyage - much better than just writing it. The red path was an excellent idea. Your narration is clear and concise too. I would like to hear how you felt about making it - including the challenges and what you would do next time to improve it? Mr Marquand.
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